Requirements inspection testing, creatinganewsimplelesson.html
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Component |
Inspector |
Date |
Status |
Remarks |
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2.2 |
DLW |
05Nov04 |
DONE |
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2.2P1 |
DLW |
05Nov04 |
Fix |
Spelling: assurt = assert |
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2.2P2 |
DLW |
05Nov04 |
Fix |
Replace “expanding” with “clicking,” dialog = dialogue |
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2.2I1 |
DLW |
05Nov04 |
DONE |
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2.2P3 |
DLW |
05Nov04 |
Fix |
Plate = place, take out “so to speak”, wished = wishes |
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2.2P4 |
DLW |
05Nov04 |
Fix |
“proceeds to” = begins, “as seen here” = “shown here,” Wiewing = Viewing |
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2.2I2 |
DLW |
05Nov04 |
DONE |
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2.2P5 |
DLW |
05Nov04 |
Fix |
Remove “then proceeds to” and change “browse” to “browses.” Collapsible = Collapsable. This paragraph in general is overly complex and wordy, and check grammar. |
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2.2I3 |
DLW |
05Nov04 |
DONE |
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2.2P6 |
DLW |
05Nov04 |
DONE |
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2.2I4 |
DLW |
05Nov04 |
DONE |
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2.2P7 |
DLW |
05Nov04 |
Fix |
Dialog = Dialogue. Watch your grammar, in your “Note:”, it’s really tricky to understand what you mean. |
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2.2I5 |
DLW |
05Nov04 |
DONE |
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2.2P8 |
DLW |
05Nov04 |
Fix |
Add quotes to “next page.” Eliminate use of passive voice. |
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2.2P9 |
DLW |
05Nov04 |
Fix |
Dialog = Dialogue. |
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2.2I6 |
DLW |
05Nov04 |
DONE |
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2.2P10 |
DLW |
05Nov04 |
Fix |
Use commas where appropriate, there are a lot of very long sentences that are borderline run-ons. |
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2.2I7 |
DLW |
05Nov04 |
DONE |
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2.2P11 |
DLW |
05Nov04 |
DONE |
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2.2 Footer |
DLW |
05Nov04 |
Fix |
The "Up" link points to itself. |