Component | Inspector | Date | Status | Remarks |
2.3.1 | EGM | 11nov04 | DONE | |
2.3.1P1 | EGM | 11nov04 | FIX | "a instructor" change to "an instructor" |
2.3.1P1 | EGM | 11nov04 | FIX | "Introductory To COnditionals 3" change to "Introductory To Conditionals 3" |
2.3.1A1 | EGM | 11nov04 | DONE | |
2.3.1A2 | EGM | 11nov04 | DONE | |
2.3.1A3 | EGM | 11nov04 | DONE | |
2.3.1P2 | EGM | 11nov04 | DONE | |
2.3.1A4 | EGM | 11nov04 | DONE | |
2.3.1I1 | EGM | 11nov04 | FIX | Change figure display to conform to our group standard. |
2.3.1P3 | EGM | 11nov04 | FIX | "page page" change to "page" "menu bar" change to "menubar" |
2.3.1A5 | EGM | 11nov04 | DONE | |
2.3.1P4 | EGM | 11nov04 | FIX | "page page" change to "page" "menu bar" change to "menubar" |
2.3.1I2 | EGM | 11nov04 | FIX | Change figure display to conform to our group standard. |
2.3.1P5 | EGM | 11nov04 | FIX | "The "Local" tab currently in the "Pages" directory," -comma after "tab" ..and another comma before "respectively" |
2.3.1A6 | EGM | 11nov04 | DONE | |
2.3.1A7 | EGM | 11nov04 | DONE | |
2.3.1P6 | EGM | 11nov04 | DONE | |
2.3.1I3 | EGM | 11nov04 | FIX | Change figure display to conform to our group standard. |
2.3.1P7 | EGM | 11nov04 | FIX | "The page "Introductory To Conditionals" page appears as" -make up your mind |
2.3.1A8 | EGM | 11nov04 | DONE | |
2.3.1P8 | EGM | 11nov04 | DONE | |
2.3.1I4 | EGM | 11nov04 | FIX | Change figure display to conform to our group standard. |
2.3.1P9 | EGM | 11nov04 | FIX | "It contains "Name" text field" change to "It contains a "Name" text field" "There the sever where the CSTutor is located is supplied by the instructor." -what? comma before "respectfully" "and account information please refer to" -comma after information that last sentence is too big. make it into two smaller ones. |
2.3.1A9 | EGM | 11nov04 | DONE | |
2.3.1A10 | EGM | 11nov04 | DONE | |
2.3.1P10 | EGM | 11nov04 | DONE | |
2.3.1I5 | EGM | 11nov04 | FIX | Change figure display to conform to our group standard. |
2.3.1P11 | EGM | 11nov04 | FIX | 'and/or "Password" ,the "Invalied Account Information"' -move the comma to where it should be. "Invalied" change to "Invalid" |
2.3.1I6 | EGM | 11nov04 | FIX | Change figure display to conform to our group standard. |
2.3.1P12 | EGM | 11nov04 | DONE | |
2.3.1P13 | EGM | 11nov04 | FIX | "The instructor presses the "Log In" button, the "Log In" dialog closes" change to "The instructor presses the "Log In" button, and in response the "Log In" dialog closes" "displays" change to "displayed" |
2.3.1I7 | EGM | 11nov04 | FIX | Change figure display to conform to our group standard. |
2.3.1P14 | EGM | 11nov04 | FIX | "COnditionals" change to "Conditionals" "appears as Figure 8." change to "appears as shown in Figure 8." |
2.3.1I8 | EGM | 11nov04 | FIX | Change figure display to conform to our group standard. |
2.3.1P15 | EGM | 11nov04 | DONE | |
2.3.1I9 | EGM | 11nov04 | FIX | Change figure display to conform to our group standard. |
2.3.1P16 | EGM | 11nov04 | FIX | "in which the instructor is currently in." -don't end sentences with a preposition |
2.3.1P17 | EGM | 11nov04 | FIX | 'and "Introductory To Conditionals 3" respectfully as in FIgure 10.' -you need a comma before and after respectively "FIgure 10" change to "Figure 10" |
2.3.1I10 | EGM | 11nov04 | FIX | Change figure display to conform to our group standard. |
2.3.1P18 | EGM | 11nov04 | FIX | "...please refer to Section 2.4.3 Designing a Quiz and for.." change to "...please refer to Section 2.4.3 Designing a Quiz. For..." |
2.3.1P19 | EGM | 11nov04 | DONE | |
2.3.1I11 | EGM | 11nov04 | FIX | Change figure display to conform to our group standard. |
2.3.1P20 | EGM | 11nov04 | FIX | "window and roadmapping" change to "window, and roadmapping" |