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Component |
Inspector |
Date |
Status |
Remarks |
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2.2 H1 |
KRB |
2DEC04 |
DONE | |
2.2 P1 |
KRB |
2DEC04 |
FIX | "we can" is passive and not in third person. use "instructor" instead of "user" |
2.2 P2 |
KRB |
2DEC04 |
FIX | use "he wishes" instead of "they wish" |
2.2 P3 |
KRB |
2DEC04 |
DONE | |
2.2 P4 |
KRB |
2DEC04 |
FIX | saying "then" at the beginning of every paragraph sounds juvenile. Just leave it out. |
2.2 P5 |
KRB |
2DEC04 |
FIX | saying "then" at the beginning of every paragraph sounds juvenile. Just leave it out. |
2.2 P6 |
KRB |
2DEC04 |
FIX | saying "then" at the beginning of every paragraph sounds juvenile. Just leave it out. |
2.2 P7 |
KRB |
2DEC04 |
FIX | saying "then" at the beginning of every paragraph sounds juvenile. Just leave it out. |
2.2 P8 |
KRB |
2DEC04 |
FIX | change "then can choose" to "chooses". change "insert" to "inserts". change "will replace" to "reaplaces" |
2.2 P9 |
KRB |
2DEC04 |
DONE | |
2.2 P10 |
KRB |
2DEC04 |
DONE | |
2.2 P11 | KRB |
2DEC04 |
FIX | change "will look" to "looks" |
2.2 P12 | KRB |
2DEC04 |
FIX | don't use "can" or "will" |
2.2 I1 | KRB | 2DEC04 |
DONE | |
2.2 I2 |
KRB |
2DEC04 |
DONE | |
2.2 I3 |
KRB |
2DEC04 |
DONE | |
2.2 I4 |
KRB |
2DEC04 |
DONE | |
2.2 I5 |
KRB |
2DEC04 |
DONE | |
2.2 I6 |
KRB |
2DEC04 |
DONE | |
2.2 I7 |
KRB |
2DEC04 |
DONE | |
2.2 I8 |
KRB |
2DEC04 |
DONE | |
2.2 I9 | KRB |
2DEC04 |
DONE | |
2.2 I10 | KRB |
2DEC04 |
DONE | |
2.2 I11 | KRB |
2DEC04 |
FIX | broken link |
2.2 I12 | KRB |
2DEC04 |
DONE | |
2.2 I13 | KRB |
2DEC04 |
DONE | |
2.2 I14 | KRB |
2DEC04 |
DONE |