Component Inspector Date Status Remarks
2.8 JBL 07dec06 DONE
2.8 P1 JBL 07dec06 FIX Use of passive voice "would be"
2.8 A1 JBL 07dec06 DONE
2.8 A2 JBL 07dec06 DONE
2.8 A3 JBL 07dec06 DONE
2.8.1 JBL 07dec06 FIX Missing articles "a", "the" etc. be consistant with 2.8
2.8.1 P1 JBL 07dec06 FIX Insert "the user" before "click" in the first sentence. Check also for other small gramatical errors. More missing articles.
2.8.1 I1 JBL 07dec06 DONE
2.8.1 I2 JBL 07dec06 DONE
2.8.2 JBL 07dec06 FIX Missing articles "a", "the" etc. be consistant with 2.8
2.8.2 P1 JBL 07dec06 FIX When you say "click" you ussually refer to the reader. Insert "the user" where appropiatte in order to refer to a third person. Use of the word "Accurately" probably isn't the right word.
2.8.2 I1 JBL 07dec06 FIX Caption is also missing articles.
2.8.3 JBL 07dec06 FIX Missing articles
2.8.3 P1 JBL 07dec06 FIX "saved only on". Talking about manipulation of the raw lecture does not belong in this section. A simple link to 2.2 is the most that should be there.
2.8 NAV JBL 07dec06 FIX Details of file and edit commands is not the "Next" item.