Component |
Inspector |
Date |
Status |
Remarks |
2.8 |
JBL |
07dec06 |
DONE |
|
2.8 P1 |
JBL |
07dec06 |
FIX |
Use of passive voice "would be" |
2.8 A1 |
JBL |
07dec06 |
DONE |
|
2.8 A2 |
JBL |
07dec06 |
DONE |
|
2.8 A3 |
JBL |
07dec06 |
DONE |
|
2.8.1 |
JBL |
07dec06 |
FIX |
Missing articles "a", "the" etc. be consistant with 2.8 |
2.8.1 P1 |
JBL |
07dec06 |
FIX |
Insert "the user" before "click" in the first sentence. Check also for other small gramatical errors.
More missing articles. |
2.8.1 I1 |
JBL |
07dec06 |
DONE |
|
2.8.1 I2 |
JBL |
07dec06 |
DONE |
|
2.8.2 |
JBL |
07dec06 |
FIX |
Missing articles "a", "the" etc. be consistant with 2.8 |
2.8.2 P1 |
JBL |
07dec06 |
FIX |
When you say "click" you ussually refer to the reader. Insert "the user" where appropiatte in order to refer to a third person. Use of the word "Accurately" probably isn't the right word. |
2.8.2 I1 |
JBL |
07dec06 |
FIX |
Caption is also missing articles. |
2.8.3 |
JBL |
07dec06 |
FIX |
Missing articles |
2.8.3 P1 |
JBL |
07dec06 |
FIX |
"saved only on". Talking about manipulation of the raw lecture does not belong in this section. A simple link to 2.2 is the most that should be there. |
2.8 NAV |
JBL |
07dec06 |
FIX |
Details of file and edit commands is not the "Next" item. |