Week 5 Inspection

• Variation on "he/she" should be replace with the user or the adiministrator ...
• Most of the prose sould be walkthrough 3rd person active voice (if you want to know what that is read Fisher milestone for the appointer thingy
• We need to do through checks of our own files.
• We need to actually correct these problems



Section	Status	Comments
Index.H	FIX	Shouldn't version be .Milestone number? Date needs to be changed too.
Index.A Section1	DONE
Index.A Section2.1	DONE
Index.A Section2.2	FIX	2.2. CreateEditProject.html not present
Index.A Section2.3	DONE
Index.A Section2.4	FIX	Section 2.4.3, 2.4.3.X and 2.4.3 don't exhist
Index.A Section2.5	FIX	Section 2.5 doesn't exhist
Index.A Section2.6	DONE
Index.A Section2.7	FIX	Section 2.7 doesn't exhist
Index.A Section3 Section4 Section5 and Section5.X	FIX	Section 2.7 doesn't exhist
1.H	DONE
1.P1	FIX	Last sentence has two "and"'s
1.P2	FIX	Weren't we taking out all "pedgogical" references?
1.1.H	DONE
1.1.P1	FIX	Capitalize "To", and use bullets instead of letters.
1.1.P2	FIX	Pedagogical stuff again.
1.2.H	DONE
1.2.P1	DONE
1.2.P2	DONE
1.3.H	DONE
1.3.P1	FIX	Who put all the pedagogical stuff back in?
1.3.P2	FIX	CSC, not CCS; "University or and college or university" needs to be fixed
1.3.P3	FIX	See P1
1.4.H	DONE
1.4.P1	FIX	Interface is not web-based necessarily, so re-word this
1.4.P2	DONE
1.4.P3	DONE
1.5.H	DONE
1.5.A1	FIX	Take out comma
1.5.A2	FIX	Take out comma
1.5.P1	DONE
1.5.P2	FIX	Re-word section a and d
1.5.P3	FIX	Was I asleep during the pedagogical meeting?
1.A1	DONE
1.A2	DONE
1.A3	DONE
2.H	DONE
2.P1	DONE
2.P2	DONe
2.A1	DONE
2.A2	DONE	Link is waiting on page to be provided
2.A3	DONE
2.A4	DONE
2.A5	DONE	Link is waiting on page to be provided
2.A6	DONE
2.A7	DONE	Link is waiting on page to be provided
2.A Prev	DONE
2.A Next	DONE	Link is waiting on page to be provided
2.A Up	DONE
2.A Index	DONE
2.1.H	DONE
2.1.P1	FIX	Take off caps in "Primary Funtion"; Sentence 2: "has the function" badly worded; Sentence 3: Change "looks" to something a little more technical; Update this so it reflects current UI, not the old UI.
2.1.A1	DONE
2.1.A2	DONE
2.1.A3	DONE
2.1.A prev	DONE
2.1.A next	DONE
2.1.A Up	DONE
2.1.A Index	DONE
2.1.1.H	DONE
2.1.1.P1	FIX
2.1.1.I Figure1	DONE
2.1.1.P2	DONE	Sentence 1 : Sentence 2 : "discussed later" in what section and add link
2.1.1.P3	FIX	Sentence 3 :
2.1.1.I Figure 2	DONE
2.1.1.P4	DONE
2.1.1.P5	FIX	Sent. 3 Change "datum" to "text"
2.1.1.P6	FIX	'Schedule -> Add Section...' is described incorrectly
2.1.1.P7	FIX	Select Instructor does not do what is stated; Last Sent: Spelling on "detail" 'explained in detail, later' where and add a link.
2.1.1.P8	DONE
2.1.1.P9	DONE
2.1.1.P10	FIX	'explained in detail later' where and add a link
2.1.1.P11	DONE
2.1.1.A prev	DONE
2.1.1.A next	FIX	should be Faculty Overview not instructor Ui
2.1.1.A up	DONE
2.1.1.A index	DONE
2.1.2.H	DONE
2.1.2.P1	FIX	all menu name are missing ending single quote
2.1.1.A prev	DONE
2.1.1.A next	DONE
2.1.1.A up	DONE
2.1.1.A index	DONE
2.1.3.H	DONE
2.1.3.P1	FIX	Sen1 pressed s/b clicks Sen 2remove "Then, " "or student statistics, or" remove 1st or (to many or's in this sentence) this is not a walkthrough
2.1.3.P2	FIX	this is not a walkthrough
2.1.3.P3	FIX	this is not a walkthrough
2.1.3.P4	FIX	this is not a walkthrough
2.1.3.P5	FIX	this is not a walkthrough
2.1.1.A prev	FIX	Faculty Overview not instructor UI
2.1.1.A next	DONE
2.1.1.A up	DONE
2.1.1.A index	DONE
2.2.	FIX	2.2. CreateEditProject.html is not present
2.2.1 H1	DONE
2.2.1.P1	FIX	Sent1: Bad plural usage; Re-word rest of paragraph
2.2.1.1.H	FIX	Can we rename "Create Schedule Wizard"? It doesn't sound very good. And how come there's only one section? This is missing a second section on how to create without the wizard.
2.2.1.1.P1	FIX	Where are the figure numbers? Don't say "self-explanantory", say nothing.
2.2.1.1 I1 figure1	FIX	No title or figure number. left justify the window title
2.2.1.1.P2	FIX	Please introduce the window you are discribing. can you manully type in the year and quarter field? or must the user use the pull down? please mention the pull-downs
2.2.1.1.I2 figure 2	FIX	No title or figure number. left justify the window title winter s/b Winter
2.2.1.1.P3	FIX	Sent1: Missing "a"; Figure numbers missing; Capitalize button names;
2.2.1.1.P4	FIX	Sent1: Missing "the"; Sent3: "detailed", not "detail"; mention breifly what the browse button does.
2.2.1.1.I3 figure 3	FIX	No title or figure number. left justify the window title
2.2.1.1.P5	FIX	Introduce the next window what's it for. Apparently copied from P4, re-word this and fix P4 mistakes
2.2.1.1.I4 figure 4	FIX	No title or figure number. left justify the window title
2.2.1.1.P6	FIX	see P5
2.2.1.1.I6 figure 5	FIX	No title or figure number. left justify the window title
2.1.1.A prev	DONE
2.1.1.A next	FIX	Rename and wrong link
2.1.1.A up	FIX	Rename and wrong link
2.1.1.A index	DONE
2.2.2.H	FIX	wrong size
2.2.2.P1	FIX	needs all prose this is just a shell for link perposes
2.2.2.A prev	FIX	Font Size
2.2.2.A next	FIX	Font Size
2.2.2.A up	FIX	See above
2.2.2.A index	FIX	See above
2.3.H	DONE
2.3.P1	FIX	Sen3 'is' s/b has
2.3.1.H	DONE
2.3.1.P1	FIX	Instructor menu s/b wrapped in ''
2.3.2.H	DONE
2.3.2.I1 Figure 1	FIX	Not showing up
2.3.2.I2 Figure 2	DONE
2.3.2.P1	FIX	discribe the dialog box
2.3.2.I3 Figure 3	FIX	Not showing up
2.3.3.H	DONE
2.3.3.I1 figure 4	DONE
2.3.3.P1	FIX	discribe the dialog box
2.3.4.H	DONE
2.3.4.P1	DONE
2.3.4.I1 figure 5	DONE
2.3.4.P2	DONE
2.3.4.P3	FIX	discribe the dialog box
2.3.4.P5	FIX	The formulas are very hard to follow can we skip this or be more vague. can the administrator adjust these formulas (im thinking project options) which would be a better place to do these calculations.
2.3.A1	FIX	broken link
2.3.A2	FIX	broken link
2.2.2.A prev	DONE
2.2.2.A next	DONE
2.2.2.A up	FIX	broken link
2.2.2.A index	DONE
2.4.H	DONE
2.4.P1	DONE
2.4.P2	DONE
2.4.P3	DONE
2.4.A1	DONE
2.4.A2	DONE
2.4.A3	DONE	Link is waiting for the page to be provided
2.4.A4	DONE	Link is waiting for the page to be provided
2.4.A prev	FIX	Font size
2.4.A next	FIX	Font Size, Link is waiting or the page to be provided
2.4.A up	FIX	Font Size
2.4.A index	FIX	Font Size and caps
2.4.1.H	DONE
2.4.1.P1	FIX	No text?
2.4.1.1.H	DONE
2.4.1.1.P1	DONE
2.4.A1	DONE
2.4.A2	DONE
2.4.1.1.P2	DONE
2.4.1.1.I1 figure 1	DONE
2.4.1.1.P3	DONE
2.4.1.1.P4	DONE
2.4.A3	DONE
2.4.1.1.P5	DONE
2.4.1.1.I1 figure 2	DONE
2.4.1.1.P6	DONE
2.4.1.1.P7	DONE
2.4.1.1.I3 figure 3	DONE
2.4.1.1.P8	DONE
2.4.1.1.P9	DONE
2.4.1.1.I4 figure 4	DONE
2.4.1.1.P10	DONE
2.4.1.1.I5 figure 5	DONE
2.4.1.1.P11	DONE
2.4.1.2.I6 figure 6	DONE
2.4.1.2.H	DONE
2.4.1.2.P1	DONE
2.4.1.2.I1 figure 7	DONE
2.4.1.2.P2	DONE
2.4.1.2.A1	DONE
2.4.1.2.P3	DONE
2.4.1.2.A2	DONE
2.4.1.2.I2 figure 8	DONE
2.4.1.2.P4	DONE
2.4.1.2.A3	DONE
2.4.1.2.I2 figure 9	DONE
2.4.A prev	DONE
2.4.A next	DONE
2.4.A up	FIX	name to long
2.4.A index	DONE
2.4.2.H	Fix	font size
2.4.2.P1	FIX	needs text
2.4.2.A prev	DONE
2.4.2.A next	DONE	link waiting for a page to be provided
2.4.2.A up	DONE
2.4.2.A index	DONE
2.4.3. and 2.4.3.x	FIX	seciton missing
2.4.4.	FIX	seciton missing
2.5	FIX	seciton missing
2.5.1.H	DONE
2.5.1.P1	DONE
2.5.1.I1 figure 1	FIX	Picture broken
2.5.1.P2	DONE
2.5.1.A1	FIX	change name s/b words not numbers
2.5.1.1.H	DONE
2.5.1.1.P1	FIX	discribe fields
2.5.1.1.I1 figure2	DONE
2.5.1.1.P2	DONE
2.5.1.1.P3	DONE
2.5.1.2.H	DONE
2.5.1.2.P1	FIX	links in prose s/b words not numbers
2.5.1.2.A1	DONE
2.4.2.A prev	DONE
2.4.2.A next	DONE
2.4.2.A up	DONE	link waiting for a page to be provided
2.4.2.A index	DONE
2.5.2.H	DONE
2.5.2.P1	FIX	Figure numbers "Databases->'Course Listing,'" whole thing should be ''
2.5.2.I1 figure 1	FIX	add figure number
2.5.2.P2	FIX	h:mm s/b hh:mm
2.5.2.I2 fugure 2	FIX	add figure number
2.5.2.P3	DONE
2.5.2.I3 fugure 3	FIX	add figure number
2.5.2.P4	FIX	Sentence fragments
2.5.2.I4 fugure 4	FIX	add figure number
2.5.2.P5	FIX	commas amd sentence wording
2.5.2.I5 fugure 5	FIX	add figure number
2.4.2.A prev	FIX	boken link
2.4.2.A next	DONE
2.4.2.A up	DONE	link waiting for a page to be provided
2.4.2.A index	DONE
2.5.3.H	FIX	Section Numbers
2.5.3.P1	FIX	Run on sentences, Figure numbers
2.5.3.I1 figure	FIX	add figure number
2.5.3.P2	FIX	Sentence structure and wordiness
2.5.3.I2 figure 2	FIX	add figure number
2.5.3.P3	FIX	Use of future tense
2.5.3.I3 figure 3	FIX	add figure number
2.5.3.P4	FIX	Wrong tenses
2.4.2.A prev	DONE
2.4.2.A next	DONE
2.4.2.A up	DONE	link waiting for a page to be provided
2.4.2.A index	DONE
2.6.H	DONE
2.6.P1	FIX	need a picture of login dialog
2.6.1.H	DONE
2.6.1.P1	FIX	Where does logging in happen? mighty small section can we conbine it with 2.6.
2.6.2.H	DONE
2.6.2.P1	FIX	Needs more describe each field on the screen
2.6.2.I1 figure 1	DONE
2.6.2.I2 figure 2	FIX	to big reduce the size
2.6.2.P2	DONE
2.6.2.I3 figure 3	DONE
2.6.3.H	DONE
2.6.3.P1	FIX	need more discriptions and some pictures of each of the three thing.
2.6.4.H	DONE	&
2.6.4.P1	FIX	Remove this seciton
2.6.A1 prev	DONE	Link waiting for page to be provided
2.6.A2 next	DONE	Link waiting for page to be provided
2.6.A3 Up	DONE
2.6.A4 index	DONE
2.7.H	FIX	document not provided
3.	FIX	document not provided
4.	FIX	document not provided
5. & 5.X	FIX	document not provided