Component

Inspector

Date

Status

Remark

2.5.1

JMD

11/03/05

  FIX

What is " <<<<<<< teacherdb.html" at the top?

 

The title should be larger font like for the other files and should be bold.

 

"database > teacher > permanent or term" is not clear. I assume that you're talking about the menu items clicked to get to this dialogue, but this representation is not clear.

2.5.1I1

JMD

11/03/05

FIX

If there are no comments, it should probably say "None" or be blank (blank is probably best). If you meant "No", that could work, but remove the ellipse because it gives the impression that there is more to the comment. If there IS a comment there, put more of the comment there since there's enough room in the column.

2.5.1P1

JMD

11/03/05

FIX

English Correction Suggestions:

"teacher's first/last name" not "teachers first/last name"

"what course the teacher prefers to teach" not "...prefer to teach"

"...email, WTU, or disability only " - i.e. fix commas in list and add an "or" .

"A teacher may be edited" instead of "maybe edited"

"as shown in figure 2.5.1-4" not "showen"

"'Done' will exit the dialogue and any" or "...dialogue. Any" instead of "'Done' will exit the dialogue, any".

 

It might be good to say which database the changes are committed to, but it isn't strictly necessary

2.5.1I2

JMD

11/03/05

DONE  
2.5.1P2

JMD

11/03/05

FIX

"edited. They are explained" might be better than "edited and they are explained"

"press enter" is okay, but what about the "Add" button. It should be mentioned even if pressing enter does the same thing.

2.5.1I3

JMD

11/03/05

DONE  
2.5.1P3

JMD

11/03/05

FIX

Change extra periods in list to commas.

"in the master database" would probably be better than "to".

"or for a specific term's schedule" might be better than "per term database".

2.5.1I4

JMD

11/03/05

DONE  
2.5.1P4

JMD

11/03/05

FIX

" WTUs can be edited" - you forgot be.

"term" not quarter.

Spelling - dialogue.

Spelling - shown.

Determine what figures X and X are.

2.5.1I5

JMD

11/03/05

DONE  
2.5.1P5

JMD

11/03/05

FIX

"term" not quarter

Everything below here is a duplicate of what's above and needs to be removed.

The html links on the bottom are missing. They may not need to work, but the template isn't even there.