Component |
Inspector |
Date |
Status |
Remarks |
2.1 |
SN |
16nov11 |
DONE |
Maybe add an intro sentence? |
2.1.1 |
SN |
16nov11 |
DONE |
This compound sentence sounds a bit awkwardly phrased. Run-on. |
2.1.1p1 |
SN |
16nov11 |
DONE |
|
2.1.1p2 |
SN |
16nov11 |
DONE |
|
2.1.3 |
SN |
16nov11 |
FIX |
Run-on sentence. |
2.1.3.1 Figure |
SN |
16nov11 |
FIX |
Italicize 'Home' for consistency under figure title. |